by UnorthodoxParamour
Loving the story, one of my own fantasies this...
Cant wai to read more!
Chris
Hi, You write very descriptively making it easy to picture the events. I only wish you dragged the story out more. I know good writing is very hard, but it takes a reader a while to get into it. Yours moved a little too quickly and ended too soon. Please write more. Thanks
Loved the development of the story and how Autumn quickly expanded her horizons from sexual exhibitionism to Double Penetration. My only wish is that you made the story longer so that Autumn could have enjoyed multiple partners through the night.
Hot story could really picture what was going on, yes write more about Autumn.
Read story in bed it made me so hot when I finished I turn my wife over and nailed her in the ass it was sooo hot!