All Comments on 'A Night at the Club'

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eroticauthor65eroticauthor65almost 8 years ago
Hot hot hot!

Loving the story, one of my own fantasies this...

Cant wai to read more!

Chris

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Great Story

Hi, You write very descriptively making it easy to picture the events. I only wish you dragged the story out more. I know good writing is very hard, but it takes a reader a while to get into it. Yours moved a little too quickly and ended too soon. Please write more. Thanks

creampies4evercreampies4everabout 5 years ago
Very Hot

Loved the development of the story and how Autumn quickly expanded her horizons from sexual exhibitionism to Double Penetration. My only wish is that you made the story longer so that Autumn could have enjoyed multiple partners through the night.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Hot story could really picture what was going on, yes write more about Autumn.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Read story in bed it made me so hot when I finished I turn my wife over and nailed her in the ass it was sooo hot!

Anonymous
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