All Comments on 'A Night at the Manor Hotel Ch. 02'

by JonfromEssex

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More Please

Very hot. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Please use spell check and proofread before posting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nice and hot

Looking forward to what happens with the waitress.

But, please, please, please find an editor. Verb tense change (past to present to past) and wrong words (it's mere, not mear, and vagina, not virgina) push the reader right out of the fantasy.

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