All Comments on 'A Night at the Royal Inn'

Thanks for reading! I'd love your comments. Hope you enjoyed the story.

Short and sweet - be good to see what happens the next day...

I loved your story, it was straight to the point, I ask that you would continues this story and thank you.

You said "No sexy maid skirt..." and "...as she slid off her pants." But, then you end it with "...straightened out her skirt...". You should fix that.