All Comments on 'A Night On The Town With Paula'

Nice account of an interesting episode. But we readers would like more vivid descriptions and more plot and character development.

Start with a real-life episode if you wish, but then embellish that to make a full-fledged story.

it was a pretty good story, but it would have been a little more erotic if the wife would not have hid on the floor so often. Such as while in the construction zone, she should stayed more upright and allowing a couple of the workers to view her chest and then smile, shake them just a little, and wave at them.