All Comments on 'A Night Out'

by DancingWithKafka

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Pretty good - I liked it.

Will there be any more of this? It is worth following up IMO - thanks for posting.

DawnzoDawnzoover 11 years ago
I think they have a future!

I would like to know more about James, he seems so young yet a very old soul. What is his story? Very hot story

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Too fast. Too unrealistic. Not enough detail

Queen_VickiQueen_Vickiover 11 years ago
please

Please continue this story. I find BDSM Stories involving older women, and younger men hot as hell. I especially love it, when the young man dominates the older woman. Good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Too fast

Too fast, not enough background. I'm a fan of younger men controlling older women, but I like to see the characters developed more.

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