All Comments on 'A Night "Out"'

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Justgr8Justgr8about 6 years ago
Nice

Nice to see a couple playing together, thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
1 star

It would have been more realistic if she had fucked the gentleman she met at the ice machine.

bigboatdriverbigboatdriverabout 6 years ago
5 stars!

I was with a lady friend, out of town, a few years ago. Returning to our room from supper, as the elevator doors opened on our floor, she looked up and down the hallway, saw it was clear and stripped off her dress, threw it at me and ran the full length of the hallway to our room door, totally nude, laughing all the way. When she got to the door, realizing she had no key card and would have to wait for me to slowly walk the hallway to our room, she suddenly became modest and with body language, was urging me to walk faster. I wish I had taken pictures. Your story is well written and entertaining. Thank you.

swingerjoeswingerjoeabout 6 years ago
Okay

I saw my wife’s boobs. The end.

A bit of playful fun, a little experimentation with exhibitionism. I kept waiting for something to happen, but it seems that the exhibitionism was the entire point of the story.

I’d like to have seen how this couple escalates their adventure. Ah, well.

stillaonewomanmstillaonewomanmabout 6 years ago
why spoil it with another having sex with wife

This was fantastic as written. No need to involve others. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
The divorce is just

over the horizon, no matter what comes next and it ain't pretty for their daughter

luedonluedonabout 6 years ago
Needs its own category?

Husband and wife do unusual things to enhance their own enjoyment of sex. The ice bucket scene reminded me of a movie I saw a long time ago about a pro golfer and his girlfriend who went naked to the ice machine. It's a good image of a naked woman behaving as though her nakedness is perfectly normal. (But the pro later tipped the ice onto her in bed.)

I liked the story, but surely the Category Police will be upset that no wives did things to cause husbands to upset themselves and tell their stories of woe?

Lue

BriteaseBriteaseabout 6 years ago
Liked it a lot

Far more realistic than most stories we read here.

How do I know?

Been there and done it, and thoroughly enjoyed it. A few years ago now but I still think back to watching my wife (at the time), slowly undoing buttons on her top, well aware that a group of men just along the bar were watching her every move. Then later taking her clothes off one by one as she walked from our car, across the street and up to our front door, by that time with only her high heels left on, with absolutely no idea if any of our neiboughs were watching from their windows. Then standing there smiling while I slowly locked the car up (no central locking back then), and meandered over to unlock the door.

That marriage didn’t last, but it may have if she’d done things like that a bit more often, and kept me at away from work more often.

Memories!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Very erotic and well-written

A great tease of a story. If you don't write professionally, you should.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
round 2

gotta get her to a gloryhole next or a one on one with the ice bandit next

gordo12gordo12about 6 years ago
I liked it

even though it probably should have been in the exhibitionist category. 4*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Just the start to turning her into a hot wife

This is a good way to start her on the pathway to heaven...where she becomes a shared wife.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Done that

I bet a lot of women have been naked in hotel hallways just to excite their men. I went to the beverage machine naked and two couples passed by with both expressing their approval. It was innocent fun and my husband fucked me like a horny teenager. Good times.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Conservative wives

Brought back memories of several hotel disrobings involving my then "conservative" wife. In each instance, she wore a full complement of underwear, including half slips (which now seem to be out of favor) and garter belts. On the first occasion, we had an upper floor and stood in the rear of the elevator with about six others ahead of us. I stood behind my wife, who was wearing a "little black dress" which had only minor cleavage. As the elevator ascended, I pulled her rear zipper down in slow increments. When one other couple remained, who were getting off before us, I pulled it down the rest of the way. and unclasped her bra. After they got off, I immediately pulled her dress down to her waist and grabbed her bra. As the door opened, she covered her breasts, smiled at me and ran down the hallway. As she stood at the door, I waved the key and pointed to the dress, gesturing she should step out of it. The slip followed as she looked nervously down the hallway. I relented and opened the door. But this was the prelude to gradually opening up her sexuality and turning her, at my behest, into a bit of an exhibitionist, unlocking the door to her wild side, pun intended, Some of those instances would involve the corridors and nooks and crannies of other hotels, including vacant banquet rooms

I hope you write additional adventures for this young couple.

cherokeemancherokeemanabout 6 years ago
Hopefully a Prelude only

Please don't let this atrophy as a one-off. It would be a waste. Now that her exhibitionist tendencies have peeked out from behind the curtain, innumerable paths are open to her flowering. Increasingly sexy and revealing clothes? Forfeiting items of underwear to the willing husband as an evening out progresses. Low cut and/or sheer blouses. Bras and thongs that show more than they hide. Participation in an amateur stripper night after a few drinks or tokes? Please don't let this conservative girl go to waste

Willysway1Willysway1almost 6 years ago
A wish

Wish this were my wife.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nicely done

Well written and entertaining. Also, I like you theme.

26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago

Not sure what you were trying for here, but I could detect no wizardry with words in this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Very Probable

No exaggerations here and good writing made the reader wonder, was this good imagination on the part of the author or true? We'll never know. I really enjoyed reading this. Please more like this. Maybe next time she'll try to go a step further.

Rancher46Rancher46almost 2 years ago

Well written and entertaining. No cheating, no cuckolding just an erotic tale of a faithful husband and wife. 5/5

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