All Comments on 'A Night Out To Remember'

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spoked451spoked451over 14 years ago
Great Start, Very Hot!

Great beginning and excellent first submission. More please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very hot imagery!

I would love to have this story continue... it had me very hot! I know just how the main character feels!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
CUMMMMING OUT

Great start..Hurry with the next part, I cant wait to see how Jane feels as that big hard cock takes her cherry. Will the girls want to watch and have their own party.mmmmm so many ways for this to go.Had me horny and hard at the light blue skirt with the bias cut. I have a sheer black one that the high side is all the way to my hip and the lower side is down to my knee.,,sally_spandex69 at yahoo dot com

GerriSCDGerriSCDover 14 years ago
What a story..

Thank you so much for bringing us a great story. If only it was that easy.. No matter, it is fiction, but please, please do not leave us hanging "here".. please take us to "somewhere that's not here", please go on with the story.

Jay3737Jay3737about 14 years ago
WOW!! Very Hott!!!

WOW! What a story very hott!! Cant wait for more!

bills47bills47about 9 years ago
very hot

dam I wish I was the one dressed like the girl

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