All Comments on 'A Night to Remember'

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prop69prop69almost 7 years ago
A little boring. Hubby loves wife .

Son cuckolding his dad. Mom swallows son & spits out Dad

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
antr

Great story. Wonderful introduction and consistently on-theme

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Dirty Pussy

"Her aroused, swampy cunt"? "Swampy"? Really? "The stench of sweat and sex"? "Stench"? Really? That woman has the filthiest pussy on the planet!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
lots of feeling

Yea can see where you guys are going but i could almost feel the love, your writing style is very good all the same

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
A Night To Remember?

It should be, when Dad comes home early and views the betrayal!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
It's a story

I think this is amazing, Please. keep them coming. Let hear about a time when the dad is not on a trip. How they get together. Keep up the good work.

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 4 years ago
WHY STOP NOW????? !!!!!.^*!^*!^*!

Why not have dad come home early, and stand in the doorway. Let him see the show,he can join in , or raise hell. That would be a story..good read but could be better. THANKS

LegallySaneLegallySaneabout 2 years ago

The whole time, as I was just skimming through the story, I was wanting them to notice dad in the doorway taking pictures. Then dad telling them to pack up their clothes and get out or he calls the police. Cheating bitch.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Long-winded, repetitive, same old theme, just kind of raunchy and inane. And no matter how you want to spin it, it's still adultery, Karma will come back on you...

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