by Ignoble
Son cuckolding his dad. Mom swallows son & spits out Dad
"Her aroused, swampy cunt"? "Swampy"? Really? "The stench of sweat and sex"? "Stench"? Really? That woman has the filthiest pussy on the planet!!!
Yea can see where you guys are going but i could almost feel the love, your writing style is very good all the same
It should be, when Dad comes home early and views the betrayal!!!
I think this is amazing, Please. keep them coming. Let hear about a time when the dad is not on a trip. How they get together. Keep up the good work.
Why not have dad come home early, and stand in the doorway. Let him see the show,he can join in , or raise hell. That would be a story..good read but could be better. THANKS
The whole time, as I was just skimming through the story, I was wanting them to notice dad in the doorway taking pictures. Then dad telling them to pack up their clothes and get out or he calls the police. Cheating bitch.
Long-winded, repetitive, same old theme, just kind of raunchy and inane. And no matter how you want to spin it, it's still adultery, Karma will come back on you...