All Comments on 'A Night to Remember'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Nice

That was fun. Could have used more character development (best friends who never had sex before and don't seem to have thought about it just jump right into this scene?) but the sex was hot.

Don1028Don1028over 19 years ago
As any mouse said, more build up would have

improved it, but still much better than most - Very believable

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