All Comments on 'A Night with Daddy'

by KellyJames

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AJZuluAJZulualmost 17 years ago
Wanting More...

I loved the story it left me only wanting more. I hope daddy and princess continue their exploits.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Oh My Lord !

Whoever you are you should be getting 20 lashes for leaving us in this state . I have never been so turned on by a story . You drove me absolutely crazy . You had better continue or you will be sent up for torturing people .

Bedspread02Bedspread02almost 17 years ago
Princess needs help!

Princess needs help, I think that her sister is the one to give her that help. Then you can have mom give the two little darlings the instruction and discipline that they both need for being so naughty!

Great story, keep writing

mikey

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Very hot!

Very hot and the perfect amount of non-sexual detail to set up the sex. I'm looking forward to more of your stories about encounters with Dad or other older men

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Great Story

This was a great first part to the story! I hope you continue very soon!

tinman69stinman69salmost 17 years ago
Great start of a good long story!

First of all, let me tell you that I love incest stories. I am a pushover for a hot little lady and she can get me to do most anything. Just like this little gal did her dad!!

Keep the story going please!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
fun

that was fun thank you :)

FriskyVirginFriskyVirginalmost 17 years ago
Fantastic!

It was a great story, hope to see a chapter 2 soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
thank you

I'm happy I found this story back. Please continue with another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Give a little more detail...

His cumming was a little bit abrupt. While he announced it, how do he feel it coming on? Did his toes curl? Did the muscles in his legs tense? Did he feel it in his lower back slowly building up? Did his cock harden gradually in her mouth (and did she notice) on his way to spurting? how many times did he spurt into her mouth? Did she look into his eyes as he came or when did she do this?

Great premise and sufficient description of what she looked like, but as with many writers here, don't rush through building up the orgasm and how/what each person felt.

AJZuluAJZuluover 13 years ago
Ummmm...

Very naughty...

brianna030292brianna030292almost 13 years ago
I love that story!!

Please write more like that one!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Cock Sucker

The epitomy of a perfect story. The world would be peaceful if women would suck mens cocks so willingly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Hot

Wonderful story. Write more.

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