All Comments on 'A Night with Mom Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
another

This needs a chapter two.

vastiesmith2vastiesmith2about 8 years ago
Most deficintly needs a second and maybe a 3rd

chapter. Mom show jerk him off next, and then maybe fuck his young hard cock! A young boy can satisfy his mom over and over again . His dad can't do that any more so why not take up with the son?

arrowglassarrowglassabout 8 years ago
This definitely needs follow up!

I'm hooked...reel me in with more chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Very good story

Many emotions revealed. Mom can help son without going all the way. Good results can be achieved with show and helping hand.

live4thebjlive4thebjabout 8 years ago
I second that

This story screams for a sequel. You lost a star for this one line "...craps sake". Would have sounded better with Christ or whatever but craps just sounded stupid. ****

nic331nic331about 8 years ago
Very hot

Gave it a 4, only because he used her name instead of mom/mommy. Otherwise, hot!

WichitalinemanWichitalinemanabout 8 years ago
Continue

This is a comment to incourage you to finish a good start to a really good story.

rightbankrightbankabout 8 years ago
ok, I'm curious

but if we do get back together next week at the same time, please don't take it to the tone of the last scene on the DVD. If that is his idea of romance, no wonder he comes home with blue balls.

Morlan502Morlan502about 8 years ago
Next chapter?

Will mom get it in the end; will mom be giving sonny boy a crack at her crack; will mom want to drink from the fountain of youth; will mom give sonny a sonny or daughter! Next week same time, same living room! Okay, I suck at humor! But I liked your story!

StanBreyStanBreyabout 8 years ago

10/10, go for a slow progression please.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 8 years ago

Loved it. Can't wait for chapter two.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
A Really Good Movie Mate

Bring on chap. 2. A real good story line going here. Looking forward to the Grand Opening.

swfb70swfb70about 8 years ago
bowser

hot hot hot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Part 2????

Very good so far! Hope you post part 2 soon!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
More please

Please,please,please more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
COOL

I loved this slightly different approach which is a lot more believable than most of the stories on here. I was hoping he was going to stay out of her view and masturbate the first time without her knowing he was there.

I also like the way he calls her 'Tammy' with us being in no doubt of their relationship.

Please don't turn it into a family fuckfest.

HankWilliams1956HankWilliams1956about 8 years ago

Good story and now I want to read the next part. Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Ch. 1: ☆☆☆☆☆- (5-)

A very, very erotic first chapter; it introduces the protagonists to the readers in a masterly way. We know that mom is sexually frustrated very much and then some. Mom and son are comfortable around one another even when they discuss sex or rather the lack thereof. They each watch porn. They can watch it together... incest porn at that!

Mom is a keeper. I wish i were 20 & she were my mother!

♡♡♡

In an ideal world, when a son turns 18 he would start sleeping in his mom's bed for a year. It would be her moral duty to teach him how to fuck, how to make a woman happy, how to respect women and how to communicate with them!

♡♡♡

TO THE AUTHOR: YOU MUST WRITE CH. 2 & 3.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Part two please

Please make a part 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
In my book, a lucky son who gets to fuck his own mother must feel be died and went to beaven!

He is in 7th Heaven & on cloud number 9 at the same time.

(Lucky mother-fucker!)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Hot story but 4 fucking months for chapter 2?? WTF?!?!?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

its really good, but could be longer. part 2 is definitely needed in order to satisfy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
tammy?

Why is it that someone ruins a good mother-son story by having the son use mom's first name????

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great!

Thanks!

MaryAndersonMaryAndersonover 7 years ago
Enjoying the tale

and looking forward to chapter 2.

Sapper257Sapper257about 7 years ago
Tammy out, Mum in.

Good story, based on a true experience. The love is already there in a family relationship.

Full of memories.

REgards

mark_8675309mark_8675309about 7 years ago
Very Nice

I do enjoy the set up. Love the idea of mutual masterbation. Appreciate the slow tease.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
LIKE THIS CHAPTER VERY VERY MUCH. GAVE IT A 5- (4.6 = 92% = A)

:-)

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aover 2 years ago

I enjoy stories where the son is accepted as an adult. Where mother, husband, son and/or daughter can talk openly; discuss any subject without censorship; and where opinions can be expressed without guilt, shame or remorse. Where mature individuals are involved in discussion, truth and honesty should not be shaded. This chapter of this series meets the preceding requirements. 5 star rating for this chapter.

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