All Comments on 'A Night with the Girl on Fire'

Glad to see this finally up on Lit. It's your most different, most romantic story, so I hope no one holds that against you - yet with Jennifer Lawrence giving oral and riding an old love, there's obviously some hot erotic stuff still there.

I really liked the story, and also the romantic way of telling it, you've chosen. It's not all about the sex but about the love and devotion of the moment.

You've shown your skills quite often, and now you've shown your ability to write erotic romance to.

Among your best stories

nice writing, loved it