All Comments on 'A Night With Tracy Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

Good Story: A bit abrupt and the description of the lovemaking was rather clinical.

The erotic scene of the seduction and the coupling could have been stretched out and made really superlative.

Ranji from Sri Lanka

Rad'lRad'lover 16 years ago
Another good story.

I will agree with the other comment that this chapter seemed a bit hurried or forced. The club scene and the beginning of the hotel sequence could have been drawn out a bit. Much to my surprise - I did find an incorrect word that spell check couldn't catch - so 'shame' on you. But thanks for the read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Wonderfull

Love and really, why not? You are a excellent writer.Note: I´m male with 78 years old and hetero. Thank you very much.

fitntrimfitntrimabout 10 years ago
Superb sexual tension!

love the exciting passionate desires, excellent, thank you

pinkroguepinkrogueover 7 years ago
Love the depth of feeling you describe

You are right it's not the best toy 😊

fran969fran969about 2 years ago

The author knows her subject....Because she's lived it & has a great imagination.!!!..AAA+++

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