by Dirty Kitten
Good Story: A bit abrupt and the description of the lovemaking was rather clinical.
The erotic scene of the seduction and the coupling could have been stretched out and made really superlative.
Ranji from Sri Lanka
I will agree with the other comment that this chapter seemed a bit hurried or forced. The club scene and the beginning of the hotel sequence could have been drawn out a bit. Much to my surprise - I did find an incorrect word that spell check couldn't catch - so 'shame' on you. But thanks for the read!
Love and really, why not? You are a excellent writer.Note: I´m male with 78 years old and hetero. Thank you very much.
love the exciting passionate desires, excellent, thank you
You are right it's not the best toy 😊
The author knows her subject....Because she's lived it & has a great imagination.!!!..AAA+++