All Comments on 'A Noble Cause Pt. 01 - Initial Foray'

Wrong category. Straight up forced rape. Sick.

Rape isn't erotic and as such should be posted ELSEWHERE.

But one question? Why do I get the feeling this activity is being done totally without Max's knowledge or approval? Does Chrissy want to be pregnant? Well, of course. But does Chrissy have Max's approval. I don't think so. Is Chrissy going to try to pass the child off as Max's.? I think so. But, in the meantime, I am going to eagerly await Chapter 2.

It seems like something Swingerjoe would write. He likes stories about rape.

This story began with a statement: "this is a fantasy in the writer's mind"! And fantasies are just that! Then we thought he was having a fantasy about "rape", but soon found out that it was a plot between his wife and their friend...So no rape here! Finally the fantasy was also about him to fuck his best friend's wife and make her pregnant! Another point that shows this is a fantasy is: describing his wife, he says she is extremely jealous...so she would never accept this in real life! Being a fantasy, 3*

Repulsive garbage. Rape isn't entertaining. Writer should see the movie "Deliverance"

....that you try to morph into a voluntary pregnancy.

I wonder how many women would want someone who's prepared to be a rapist to be the father of their child.

Poor plot choice 1*

Laughable!!!

Or put this in fetish or group sex.

Like, how can he even be sure Max wants him to fuck his wife? It could all be a setup between two crazy bitches. And how will they handle paternity issues, and inheritance. What if Max and wife divorce, where does that leave bio-dad?

And if she just wants to get pregnant, what's with all the monkey sex, adding insult to injury against Max. Just too contrived and bizarre to enjoy.

absurd shit.

A story about the lowest kind of whore there is.