All Comments on 'A Not So Innocent Teen Crush'

by HungWelsh

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Huh?

He loves her so he rapes her?? I don't understand. Sad, sick story, I'm afraid.

JibecaJibecaabout 13 years ago
good

i liked this to have a love make you go to the point of taking what u want. its drastic, emotional, very good.

HungWelshHungWelshabout 13 years agoAuthor
To anonymous

He rapes her because he believes that he deserves her love

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Would have voted...

... a '5'.

... If votes had been turned ON.

HungWelshHungWelshabout 13 years agoAuthor
To Anonymous again

Thanks for your support. This is my first submission so still learning the ropes of the site.

Voting is now turned on

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

"an ominous bump in her abdomen"

Since it happened in a short time, maybe its gazes...

Not great, not bad, but plausible...

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Meh

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