All Comments on 'A Novel Experience'

by Milliemoon

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Wonderful, very well written

Not to mention sizzling!

don87654don87654almost 16 years ago
Could have been better

The mention of the condom ruined this story. They could have just fucked and the reader could have just envisioned whether or not there was a pregnancy or STD in a fantasy such as this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
this was hotttttt

very well written, just enough background and moved very well, keep the story line going, please....

MeanOralSexToy4womenMeanOralSexToy4women6 months ago

She told him she writes erotic stories and then experienced some of what she writes about. I love that she was on top so she could take as much of him and have him exploring her orifaces. I too have done this but not on the first date. I find women want vanilla until she is sure he can be gentle and easygoing.

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