All Comments on 'A Nude Weekend with New Friends'

Great story. I remember this from its previous version and loved it then, too. When Matt first meets Yunwen you end a paragraph with, "I swallowed, trying to repress the thoughts I was having about my dad's fiancé." Just in case you wanted to get rid of "fiancé" and keep her as a newly reacquainted friend of his dad's.

nice summer tale!

not bad but you did miss 1 reference to future family

"trying to repress the thoughts I was having about my dad's fiancé."

fiancé probably should have been friend.

Erm, how can sex with a stepsister - someone with whom you share no genetic link beyond that of pretty much anyone else in your hometown - count as incest?

Here's another one: if your (single) mother met your (single) father-in-law after the wedding and they decided to get hitched, would you have to give up having sex with your wife in order to avoid having a burning cross left on your front lawn?

Who's Irina?

She is the woman I would have chosen too.

I first read this story on reddit and I couldn't comment there so I came here to sing your praises. This story had such good character development and pacing and teasing I actually wanted to read the story for plot not just eroticism. You are an amazing writer, your characters make me want to be in the story.

Loved the story thanks.

It made me cum and it was good

This story just didn't do much for me. I knelt getting losr-. Maybe I,all readi it agan under better cuircunstances

Any story featuring butt naked, cock teasing Hijabis definitely gets my vote. Great work!

There's no blood tie between Matt and the 2 girls so no question of incest. Not even if he had sex with the mother;. I was half expecting that! I've just read the original version as well and can't see anything there which should give any concern. You worry too much my son! You also write a really good story. Well done. m222rjr

@m222rjr I didn't think it counted as incest, either, but Literotica put the original story there back when I first submitted it. I had it submitted as exhibitionism.

Eurasians have brown hair, not black.

But, over all, an excellent job.

The major reason for the taboo against incest is shared blood which often leads to a prevalence of genetic disorders. I'm sure most religions have prohibitions against it too but i personally don't think they have much of a leg to stand on particularly Christians since they believe we're all the results of two progenitors one of which was practically a clone seeing as how eve was made from dirt and Adam's rib bone, regardless great story edited or unedited. Also the fact they didn't meet for so long also greatly decreases the creep factor, because it doesn't feel like a sudden irrational change in their relationship which would undoubtedly be psychologically unhealthy. the characters are really fleshed out and three dimensional and I'm looking forward to my sexy summercamp, secret nudists and a family secret and Helen's adventure all of which look like continuations on this story.

Really well done love story! Great sexual buildup to the Climax of Matt and Bao Getting Together! Really Enjoyed te Story from Start to Finish!