by literot
I really want to know what happens when they get home, so long as it is not any type of bondage or any other stuff like that
This sounds like a fun idea, might be tempted to give it a go sometime. We liked the way the story progressed and the same girl, nice touch. The Tuscan mule is also my fav.
I have had many of my friends try open marriage and it never turned out well, one or the other of them always gets hurt!
I'm not a writer. But in my opinion, your story needs something? Maybe something like I mentioned in my message to the author, :-)
For an interesting twist,,, 5 Stars!
Gay Kat.