All Comments on 'A One-off Open Marriage'

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jenorma2012jenorma2012about 8 years ago
Yes

I really want to know what happens when they get home, so long as it is not any type of bondage or any other stuff like that

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
MORE, he pleaded.

Please continue and get as kinky as you want

foxyfionafoxyfionaabout 8 years ago
tempting

This sounds like a fun idea, might be tempted to give it a go sometime. We liked the way the story progressed and the same girl, nice touch. The Tuscan mule is also my fav.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Interesting twist

I have had many of my friends try open marriage and it never turned out well, one or the other of them always gets hurt!

I'm not a writer. But in my opinion, your story needs something? Maybe something like I mentioned in my message to the author, :-)

For an interesting twist,,, 5 Stars!

Gay Kat.

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