All Comments on 'A Page Out of an Erotic Novel'

Quick and fun to read....need to go check out my local indy bookstores!

I loved it!!!!! I will never look at a bookstore the same way!!!!!

Thanks for the comments. My first story and I'm rather proud of it. A sequel is in the works.

A quick and fun read, hot too! I spotted a few errors, though, such as none-the-less (should be nonetheless, one word), and you used "know" instead of "no", but otherwise a good read. Keep writing! -katze

As a bookstore lover myself, this story was excellent... very hot and well written!

Fun and affectionate - just the way it's supposed to be. More, please!

Thanks again for the nice new comments

Well written and warm hearted. Very nice.

Really good story, well written and exciting...

Please write more...

Great first submission. You must have written other stories before.

Thanks to everyone for the new comments. This is actually the first erotic story I've completed...and only so far. Hope to finish another soon.

I liked it......

Just enough detail without dragging the story down...I will enjoy reading more of your work.

A fun read, playful and sexy. Great first contribution :) I'm off to read your second one now!

You told your story without all the crassness that seems to seep from these epages.

Terrific job.

Such a short story... with so much sex... we didn't even get to discover the background history of the family of the ownership... who cares!