All Comments on 'A Paladin's Training Ch. 13'

Really enjoying it. I like the arc of Aran and the Paladins a little better though.

I stayed for a story written with skill and detail that rivals that of some fantasy nove\s.

As I said, you have a good storyline and a good premise going on here. I do have a couple of critiques though. First, maybe put some more detail into the story, lengthen it a little bit. Secondly, some more background on the stories that surround how events came to be at their present state, (i.e. more details about the Darkening, the various groups and orders of the world, etc.,) Finally, slow the pace a little, let the story build up some more before having events proceed.

How you´re keeping the threads weaving in and out of the plot is great...doing well, this was an easy 5* Anti...thanks again for you time and effort into this story...

For the feedback - I greatly appreciate it, and as I'm doing this on my own, including the editing, it helps to get some perspective from the readers. Cheers!