by Antidarius
Your story is Good and keep the good work,but can you please put the characters name before you start the chapter because it takes long time for you to publish your chapters here,it will be helpful to the readers to remember the characters once again
Great story and characters. Can’t wait to see where this goes. I have one negative reaction. I tend to relate to the main character and revel in their development and where their adventure takes them. I am with this story. However, I am getting bogged down with supporting character development and what I feel is too much lingering on their thoughts and actions. It works, but I’m wanting more main character story. Thank you for your great writing. :)
I love this story! Please be writing as I make this comment! It’s been two months and it would be an amazing Christmas present to have a new chapter posted!
This may be random, but I was Elaina have Aron’s babies mmmmmmmmmm