All Comments on 'A Paladin's Training Ch. 01'

Would like to see where you go next with this one

Just a first draft for now - got lots of fleshing out to do, no pun intended!!

Let´s see where you go from here, moving on to the next chapter, you piqued my interest. Thank you for your submission.

i dont know why i have not read this story yet, i have you in my saved writers list and now I am going to enjoy reading every chapter the next couple of days.

It's been a looong time since I've read an author's work without a single grammatical mistake. Great work. Thumbs up !

That's what I call the right balance between plot and action.

I also really like the positive tone (serivce, contentment) without being tame.

Thumps up!

First time reading this and I usually read at night on mobile but it took a few tries to get into the story, a shock of the world, and maybe peculiar pacing to start. Maybe a bit of narrative would help. But I made it here and I’ll definitely give the next chapter a read. 5 stars from me.

I am giving 5 stars for a story more fantasy than the sci-fi I prefer. Interesting start of what seems to be a longish saga.

But no, it’s not totally grammar perfect. Well spelling perhaps. The word “it’s” is a contraction of “it is” and not showing the possession of “it”. Many writers get it wrong.

A good start, I will read more.

The comments from before mine are at least a year old, so I feel privileged to be able to write and say how much I enjoyed the first installment of what I hope will be an epic novel!

Thank you for sharing with us, your skills, time, and bringing us a wonderful, erotic and fantasy filled story.

Daniel