All Comments on 'A Part of Us'

I can totally agree on the green E for it.

Though it felt just a little bit rushed. Not in development itself, but regarding the length of the story.

I'd loved to learn just a bit more about the characters and maybe see the people orbiting each other a little longer to build up more anticipation.

Maybe you can tell us some more.

Eviant,

I liked this story a lot. The characters seemed real, which is arousing to me, and the sex was very hot. :)

Erica :)

Great, to the point and hot. Not many 3 somes work as well as this! Yeah!! Makes sense, and has feelings- cause no matter what you do it's part of the mix!!

This story is completely believable. I loved it. Please create more stories like this. Thanks.

Intriguing set-up, engaging characters, believable dialogue and situations--and darn good on the nuts and bolts of grammar, making for a smooth ride. My taste would have been for a tad more character depth, but it's your railroad and you get to run it your way. Regardless of my quibble, I appreciated the inventive scenarios and fully enjoyed the story. Thanks.

OH Wow !!

Sam and Derrick have known each other for years but never have even kissed.

Annie kisses Sam and finds out they both like it, and Annie sends Derrick to get Sam from work.

Annie lets Derrick fuck Sam, then Annie fucks Derrick while Sam licks Annie's cunt and fingers Derrick's Prostate as they come together.

Wonderful story - well written and kept me involved. I have always liked girls with tiny tits anyway. I like Lesbian stories too, and prostate massage stories.

The three principals in the story are interesting, and your way of writing is great.

I look forward to reading more of your work. Thanks.

SMOKING hot!

What likable characters!

Liked changes in perspective, scorching 1st 3sum!

And you've been mentioned as an editor on at least one fantastic story....