All Comments on 'A Particularly Easy Pony to Please Ch. 02'

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the_icier_manthe_icier_manalmost 14 years ago
nice

really nice start. hope to read soon how her training is progressing. Please continue soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Perhaps you should use a bit of empathy, perhaps you could now and the describe what the protagonists feel. Probably your stories would be a bit longer but more interesting to read.

jacobinorpjacobinorpalmost 7 years ago
Screamingly funny

Dead pan erotic/class humor, funniest thing I've read on the site

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