All Comments on 'A Peek into Their Lives'

by moresubthanslave

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great Start

continue please

Brent37Brent37over 6 years ago

I agree. Keep going.

visioneervisioneerover 6 years ago

Very well written D/s story. I love the mood of the piece and that you take us into her emotions. And I think the ending is just right.

moresubthanslavemoresubthanslaveover 6 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you so much. I often get little scenes in my head like this and I love writing them down. They aren't popular though because people prefer longer stories that have actual characters and plots. I really enjoy the scenes though so I may continue writing them as they come.

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