All Comments on 'A Penny For Your Thought Ch. 01'

A class act for what is apparently your first story. I especially liked the way you described Cassie without needing to mention age, height or bra size. At this stage I would have put the story in the Mind Control section, but never the less looking forward to Ch. 2. Perhaps we will find out how Cassie obtained her powers of persuasion (hint!).

I like the mystery, at least to each other, about their abilities. One misstep. She stayed with him for a month, but only saw his apartment at night?

Maybe I just didn't explain it correctly but he lived in a different place during that time. At least that's what I thought when I wrote it.

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