All Comments on 'A Perfect World'

Hey "00" are you one of those trolls who just cruise the site and plant "00". Go do something else!

Great story and well written subtleperfume. Gave you a +5.

bobkit

wow we have a great writer in this group..I encourage you PLEASE write more..excellent character development..sensous

it was believeable cant praise you enough

Well written, few errors, sexy -- if I were a woman I would have come four times. Please keep writing. jesse

this is a delicious story and one i relate to closely...the honesty and the context of life is wonderful.

....realistic. -pistolpackinpete

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Your treatment of these women's love and their marriages is clearly true to life and sexier for that. Nice writing.

Thanks for a realistic portrait of adult lesbian love! Cannot wait for your next story. Keep up the good work.

I truly loved this story, so much love, tenderness and seducion, I would love to be able to relate to this love affair.

A wonderful, remarkably truthful, well written piece. Full of love realism and sensual descriptins. I loved every word.

I've fallen in love with all of your stories but this one seems to have much more maturity than the others - if that's even possible because all of them are incredible. The chemistry was wonderful to watch unfold between Cindy and Jen. I love you for this story. Yeah, ya hear that everyone? I love her! :)

Your use of the English language to create living scenes that captivate are absolutely amazing. Here are some words that captured my attention in this story and a Perfect World:

vivacious, voluptuous, ravenous, opulent, lustrous, supple, knave, solicitous, pendulous, sepia, succulent, luxuriating, sumptuous, labia, copious, hyperbole, intoxicatin, racy, distended, pungent,rivulets, sultry suckled, acolyte, reanimate, perineum, undulated, ferocity, ardent, wantonly, and virtuoso...

WOW, I hope you will have time to add more stories to the amazing ones you have already posted. Thank you for the pleasure and pictures you painted in my mind.

I look forward to reading the third one and will have my dictionary close at hand. New words and even familiar words have taken on new meaning as I selectively sought their rich meanings

I felt like we were sitting around having coffee (or something stronger) and you were telling me a story, the whole time painting a picture of your relationship with your friend. A story and a picture that I thoroughly enjoyed. ~ L

Very good,more of the same please

a kind of story that you never tired of rekindling,so realistic,romantic,without diminishing the other facts of life.indeed well written and full of substance while reading into it you got into trance by the enormity of the characters love of each other.To the writer a million thanks to you.(cinder)

I just happened upon this story . Wow this is breath taking . I wish there was a part 2

Don't get me wrong. The sex is scorching. I can't tell you how many times I came while reading and (blush) re-reading this story.

But what makes it all so powerful is the way you bring the people to life. There is a naturalism in your dialogue and narration that pulls the reader in and doesn't let go even after the final word. I found the situation and characters lingering in my head long after I'd turned off my computer.

There are few writers on this site working at anywhere near this level. Thank you for sharing your talent.

thank god i finally found a story worth reading , no offence to the others, but i've been stuck between 3-4 stars lately...

untill now! You really know how to get the imagination (and other things) flowing..

ABsolutely LOVED IT!!! ~*Maddy*~

A great story! I can't stop thinking about it!

a really great story! i luv that u didn't make both characters divorced from their husband and married, as u said it is less than ideal, no one living in a perfect world, it's good enough that both characters r in love with each other

technically both women are BI in the beginning since they're still involved with the husbands.

I'm a 50+ yo straight guy; I can see this happening, as well as understand it. Accepting it is a little harder, I disagree with adultery; however after Andy Jr. grows up - then ???

DKP

Great story. Detailed love making and sensitivity to personal feelings and the challenges of an unorthodox relationship.

Even in "A Perfect World" sometimes there aren't enough words to adequately express how I feel about this story. It elicited a cornucopia of emotions, physical stimulation, and uncertainty, especially in the final resolve of the story. I'm not sure if I would want a life of loving and never fully having, fully living. I stand in no judgement, cause just as sure as you say, "I could never ..." the Universe has a way of bringing it to you, to see what you WOULD do. Sometimes, we just love who we love - period! Kudos Subtleperfume, a story well done

Your husband must have been a selfish asshole. I have this hellish disease. It robs its victims of life. One day your metabolism just stops. You not only get fat, but you feel horrible, fatigued, always sweating, and your blood cholesterol levels go sky high. I almost died before I was diagnosed. It has taken me over 10 years to recover and lose the weight. Part of the problem is the suggested TSH levels one should have. These are off. We need much more hormone; at least I do. Thank God I found an endocrinologist who was interested.

The generic med by Mylan is junk. Does NOT work. Use only Synthroid or Levoxyl which now is owned by Synthroid. I had my bad moments, but nothing like your husband. Any of my bitching wasn't me, it was how awful I felt. I love my wife very much; it was our sex life that helped us through.

Why read here? I've put some of these stories to good use in bed. Men, if you read this, never take for granted your wife. I don't & never have. Everytime you make love or fuck, treat it like it's the first. Be both loving and dominating. Encourage her to treat you as she would if with another woman. Learn their complex appetite and cravings. Have her trim, douche with vinegar or baking soda if need be after her period. And eat her like your life depends on it. Lick her through and keep going as she comes down; she might just want it again. Beat off before you have sex. Not every woman wants a huge load inside her.

Remember, God created her to complete you. Let her. Treat her with the love Adam had for Eve. You will be completed and she will be satisfied.

Living in the capital area most of my life, I could envision it all, and even had a friend named Cindy who was bisexual. Wonderfully told!

You certainly have "the Voice" to tell such a captivating & "grabbing" story that grabs one's heart-strings and never lets go. Wow! Keep it up! More (sequels), pls!

Well written and great use of words to describe what was happening without intruding into the subject matter. I must say that I might have struggled with the consequences of his medical problem but I couldn't work out what was happening with the child as there seemed to be no evidence of a motherly love. Perhaps I missed something but it was only a story after all.

Wow. Oh my! I seriously need a cigarette right about now. That was so sexy and hot. Superb story of love and friendship; being there for each other in times of need.

This is the second or third time I've read this story, and it is still as hot as the first time. Thank you so much for sharing this with us!

Really enjoyed your story, wish I could read more . Enjoy your life and please write more

This is my 2nd time reading this story. And way you too navigated your early encounter and were able to strengthen your bond is nothing less than a testament of pure unadulterated LOVE.

5🌟's. and 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹 a dozen roses.

It's not fair for you to be compared to your own stories. But comparing this to Like a Secret? This is good... very good, but my soul did't hurt the same way. I think this was extremely good, but Secret was a masterpiece.

Will she be with you when her son is grown?

It is the second time I read this story and it’s even better. I wonder if after all this time you are still apart. And you haven’t continued this story so I guess you are. Some wouldn’t have called it a perfect world but the story is perfect. Well written, some said that your knowledge of English is great and it’s wonderful to dwell in the pleasure of reading it. There are some very good writers here in Lit. Not a few, more than a few and you are one of them. Thank you

Second time reading, and just as captivating/poignant/beautifully erotic as the first. Wish you would continue to share your talent with us.

Im kinda sad that you two didn't end up together but i'll just make my own ending that contains you two being married to each other so i can let this story go. Its still a good story tho! Loved it <3

Yet another great story ;->

Love is a powerful force and in it's rightful place nothing can break it or interrupt the energy that created it. I don't believe married women having affairs with women is committing adultery and it can't be charged with fornication because these concerns are integral between a man and woman. You have a wonderful story and it's amazing how your memory and details are so explicit. Thank you for sharing.

Amazing story: Have read a few times now and love it 😍

Thanks for sharing a part of journey, its beautifully written and I love it. I'm glad to hear you are still friends and lovers, like both of you wished. I hope in time, your relationship becomes more open, so that your husbands lover and also your children aren't oblivious about your love for each other. Take care!

This is the best writer on Lit. No question.

A fantastic story. The thyroid issue was not the total cause of his/their problems. Adequate replacement therapy returns function to normal so he must have been an asshole to boot.

I'm loath to argue with a reader who is offering me praise, but thyroid disorders exist on a spectrum. Just look up Hashimoto's disease as an example. There is no real cure for this insidious ailment.

A 'perfect world' ?

If only it were...........

Rapier