All Comments on 'A Perverted World'

Keep going!

Great start to what seems to be great story!

The story is written in an enjoyable manner with loads of puns. I cannot wait to see where his education takes him. Maybe he can join an athletic team like the cum shots.

Great story, loving it as a opening chapter. It's not subtle but I like that. More please and soon.xx

****i agree this is a good premise, but you need to be much more subtle about exploring it. "Cuntington" is a good name for a college but the other puns are a bit over the top. It would have been better to extend this idea. Take your time. I like the tone, the way this open pan-promiscuity is treated as normal. So develop it more and dial back the explicitness a tad. It is not especially erotic for the men to jack off in the mom's oatmeal while it is fine for the mom to insist on sucking her son clean after his cum.

Where is the story here? Sounds like a kid that just learned the word fuck and has to keep saying it What are you 12?

This stuff was sooo fucking horrendous..no class at all. Please never write again mate.

Cheers.

Was that? Uggg.

yep, that's what I said, you really should leave the country, perferably in a pine box,,

I do not care for "jack off" stories. I thoroughly enjoy incestuous love stories. For me, sex is just the icing on the cake. The cake would be fine without it.