by justacurvygirlxox
I will plan to stay tuned for additional chapters - this is an interesting plot line.
Like the way it started. Definitely gonna follow it. Keep on writing :)
this could be a really good story if he can get his head around how these ladies really feel.
Ì am liking this story so far. As is the problem in most relationships, in fiction or in real life, people would sure enjoy life a lot more if they would just communicate what they are feeling or thinking. Of course the other side of the coin is true as well. People would need to see those revelations as what they are... just things as they are, not judgements about them. Of course the problems come out when there are disagreements about things as they are.
Interpersonal relationships can be such a drag, and a lot of fun at the same time.
If David and Abbey would only say, "I am in love with you." Instead of, "I love you." That would get rid of a lot of problems and misunderstandings between them.
Oh well, what do I know... you are the excellent writer, not me. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
This appears to be a unique story. Finally, someone who is awkward, unsure of himself, and has not the slightest idea how to interact with women. He can not/will not say what he thinks and is afraid to express himself in an open, honest manner. Because of the unique start, rated story 5 stars.
this looks like a case of Autism spectrum at it's finest. Hope he realizes it far sooner than I did.