All Comments on 'A Pirate's Captive Ch. 02'

to short

I like the fact that he's a gentleman and a pirate. I like her spirit. But I think it is silly to act like he wouldn't have hurt her taking her in one thrust. She certainlly wouldn't have climaxed so easily, especially being afraid. I think you have to be truer to how a character would react in real life. You could have him tease the reactions he wanted out of her but to say it happened that easily and that she wasn't hurt as he took her virginity just doesn't ring as possible.

Nice story. Too short. Cant wait for part 3.

Hmm.. maybe a little too short. Other than that, I love where you are going with it, and I pray, pray, pray that you will continue it!! keep up the good work :)

LIKE I SAID GREAT STORYLINE HOPE YOU KEEP IT GOING

What happens next?!!

Please write more!! Still waiting to know what happens next