All Comments on 'A Plaid Skirt Doesn't Hurt'

by Dylan800B

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Very very bland

This was a very ordinary story without much in the way of twists, plots or even anything to keep the readers interest.

If it was your first ok, then your english was ok, construction ok, but without substance and titillation, it was always going to go nowhere, maybe Mills and Boone might be interested in mundality of this genre, but for me it missed the mark for this site and this topic

LickideesplitLickideesplitabout 11 years ago
Not a bad flash tale

But not a lot of tension, either. The environment (including school students and personnel) does add a bit, all by itself...but those possibilities were not optimized!

4*

cindylynn34cindylynn34almost 5 years ago
Naughty wife

Great day at school..... 👍

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Good one

I really like a real loving wife that really cares for her husband.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

You need to go back to school.

Barely got to the request for forgiveness before I couldn't forgive ALL the mistakes.

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