All Comments on 'A Present and a Deal Ch. 07'

I really like this story. I like the direction it is headed. Please continue.

Can't wait for next one!

I appreciate the comments. I'm glad you liked it.

I'm most of the way through the next chapter, so hopefully I'll get it posted sooner rather than later.

I've hit a productive patch (fueled in part by the enthusiasm of those readers i've heard from)!

Feel free to throw ideas/suggestions at me. I'll consider them at the very least.

I enjoyed reading this very nice series DB!! Well written indeed!

If you havent already written the next chapter, may I suggest losing gramma (a purely selfish request since I'm not into mature) and get more guys into it..

For e.g., the son could trade in points for getting his friend(s) sexual favors from his mom. In turn, he could ask them to help with coursework, or use one of his rich friends beach house or whatever..

Anyway, keep up the good work!

Nice part again. Thanks. I'm glad that you "hit a productive patch" and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. In contrast to gintopop I ask you to keep grandma aboard! Plus it's a family thing, so I wouldn't like his friends to have sex with his mom. She is not a hooker!

Anyways, I'm sure you will do a great job again!

Kinky and yet sweet with the sex he has with his mom.

Now dad is having a little something going on with his mom. Grandma sex could be fun.

Sweet!!

Thanks for the read

Good intertwining of subplots. Would like more indepth character development of grandmother and father. The relationship between mother and son could developed on a more personal level. Mother appears to be playing with little emotional and/or mental sensitivity (possible positional power play). She appears more interested in her husband and his mother than she is with her son. With that said, still a 4.5 rated story.