All Comments on 'A Present and a Deal Ch. 08'

by DaviBlack

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Dull

This whole "scrabble points" thing is soooo lame

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Nice part. I wish the parts where a little bit longer, but I guess that would mean more time to wait for us fans. Thanks Davi!

kirstymiakirstymiaalmost 13 years ago
I'm Loving it

Can I play scrabble with grandma?

As usual another great part to a classic story.

KEEP IT UP

xXxXx

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Love it

I await every chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Great story!

Can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Great story.

Glad to see that you are back working on the series. Looking forward to the next one.

jonthelostjonthelostalmost 13 years ago
more please

I really enjoy the way you are writing this and the way its building.

keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Hoping to see a new chapter soon

DaviBlackDaviBlackalmost 13 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the encouragement

I have a lot of the next chapter finished. Hopefully I'll finish it up and get it posted before too awful long.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 13 years ago
Sweet

Hot and kinky.

Sweet grandma pussy, his dad will want some of that.

Thanks for the chapter

arrowglassarrowglassabout 10 years ago
This series is awesome!

Each one just adds more excitement and passion to this story...love the way you write!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So looking forward to readin' on.......!

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a11 months ago

I appreciate the fact that the son recognizes that his grandmother is a sexual being. He has the opportunity to learn from her thus becoming a better lover. Good series. 5 star.

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