All Comments on 'A Present and a Deal Ch. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
WTF

Not even remotely believable or eotic

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 13 years ago
That was a wonderful day

A totally kinky day with the guys taking all of the pussy they could handle.

A great chapter.

Thanks

eatcoocheatcoochalmost 13 years ago
Yes!

Read all 10 chapters in one day, just could not stop, well except to handle a hard cock several times!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Keep em coming.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

I had expected a little more sex, since mom said she would do anything. The could have had some anal or even dp. Still a good chapter, but it could have been better. Keep it up and thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
get rid of dad

more erotic scenarios with mom please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Good stuff! Keep it coming! Pun intended!! ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

He should have a sister!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Is there a new chapter coming soon?

kirstymiakirstymiaover 12 years ago
COME back DAVIBLACK

Hiya

I am in need of more Daviblack stories,

I think it's been to long since you have added any and I need more of your stories to get me through these cold nights.

COME BACK DAVIBLACK

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Another Chapter

Don't forget, he promised to visit grandma. He should take Mom along, too. Take Dad for Grandma since Dad is crazy hot to impregnate his mother, which is only right, freeing up Mom and Son to work on their own baby. AnHoa Rifleman.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Hope to read a new chapter soon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
VERRY GOOD

ABSOLUTLY GREAT. PLEASE CONTINUE. SPRING BREAK SHOULD BE THE GREATEST.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
another chapter?

please continue

ken0001ken0001about 12 years ago
Kristymia

Even with out using my esp I see a outstanding future for you on literotica P.S. I think Kristymia wants to fuck you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
too much

ch 1-8 were great, but 9 and specially 10 you lost it - way too much raw sex - it's no longer titillatingE6C3

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
it's great that both the kid and his dad

got to blow their balls up the cunts they came out of. Family semen belongs up family cunts.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a11 months ago

The only thing which separates fiction from reality is human frailities.

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