All Comments on 'A Present and a Deal Ch. 13'

by DaviBlack

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Too little story, too much fucking in a row. The chapters before were much better.

I hope you'll return to your usual quality in the next chapters. Thanks for writing, though!

homerjayhomerjayabout 11 years ago

building towards two sons and two moms?

Stick_ManStick_Manabout 11 years ago

First of all, welcome back! It had been too long!

As I was browsing the new stories, I was very excited to see this latest installment. And the facials scene...well done! A double at that. I feel like that was for me.

I'm a huge fan of the series and I can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
nice

what a hot story

but i think you could make the story with a slower tempo

cant wait for the next chap

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a11 months ago

Nobody has a friend like Sam. If they do, I feel sorry for them when push comes to shove. P.S> I guess the author had writer's block. Chapter 12 and 13 suggest this event.

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