All Comments on 'A Priestess of Isis Ch. 01'

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bjl257bjl257about 9 years ago
Miss Prim

Fantastic first 2 pages ......... More please ! !

luedonluedonabout 9 years ago
Writer par excellence

Another superb start.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Good but watch the details

So far, so good.

Be careful to get the details right:

In a miracle, the ice tea becomes beer;

the quote is "render unto Caesar";

Mantels go over fireplaces, mantles go,over people.

MissPrimMissPrimabout 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

I appreciate all your support!

Anon- (my most reliable critic) thanks for edits!

Happy Easter!

Chapter 2 almost done.

m1k3m1k3about 9 years ago
Great start,

Looking forwards to reading the rest in the series, please let me know if I forget to check back.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

It has been over a month. I am anxiousky waiting for the next installment.

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Annoyingly cheerful in the morning. Thankfully, that wears off by the end of the day. Have no cats, 4 adult children, and no boyfriends. Hmmm, something is not quite right here. Writing is my day job.

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