All Comments on 'A Prison Break Ch. 03'

Didn't really like any one of the characters in the story, though it was quite compelling. I believe your writing ability is about as good as it gets. The hard work you've put into this tale is greatly appreciated.

well your writing is incredible, this story is so fucked up and deep and wrong and emotional it fucking plays with your mind, and I knew the ending was going to be something fucked up, there's no other way to end a story like that, but I had to finish it; it's just a downer by the time you get through all of it

it certainly puts things in perspective, when it comes to drinking and emotions and anger. it was a good story, really hot at times and really fucked up at other times, but all in all you can certainly write.

anyway I liked it, I didn't love it, I liked "the indelible wedding memory" better, actually kind of disappointed you haven't continued with it since you left if open at the end of the story.

well hopefully I'll be reading more of your stories, maybe something a little less depressing ;P

Loved it - Hated it*.! Story close to my real life but not with the Booze, just about the truth and it hurts.! Thanks for a great story and I know you will write many more great ones in the future, and as for me "Four wives later and a whole bunch of females later and I still don't know what love really is."!! Signed: AXS HOXE.

I nearly cried at the end. How many different emotions did you throw at us readers in that last chapter? I can't even describe my feelings from one chapter to another! That was one extremely well written tale. Well done, mate.

Wonderful character development, nicely complex. Clearly a lot of work went into this. Well worth its length!

This was a very beautiful story which I sometimes loved and sometimes hated.I would really like a version of this story where he lives. It would be harder to write but it would turn out to be really special.

Overall, I thought this was a great series and really enjoyed reading it. However, is there any way you can write a part 4 or an epilogue with a happy ending? I just feel like this story isn't really over--even if it seems to be that way.

Not what I expected when I started reading the story. But honest. Unfortunately, looking for escape from reality, not reality. Your writing is top notch. Please keep writing.

Once more you have written a story that hits many sensitive subjects and portrayed the emotional battles each character goes through in facing them. The characters in this story could be anyone of us facing what we perceive is right or wrong, chemical dependency and daily coping mechanisms - perhaps that is why some are upset with the ending. The story doesn't need to be revised or have an additional chapter written - it is a well thought out story with a realistic ending. Keep up the great work!

I enjoyed this series so much, and could not help but be carried away by it. The ending was very moving. Keep up the excellent work!!! Five Stars *****

what can I say ? Highs Lows sexy and tears.

It is a brilliant story, shame he was killed off in the end though!

I would have liked him to live and to be a lover of mother and daughter.

A++++ rating

Thank you

Those of you who would like to find out what happens next in the aftermath of “A Prison Break” should go to my stories page and click on the sequel title. Clicking on my name above will take you to my stories page.

I appreciate your readership and hope you'll eventually read “In the Wake of That Night,” and my other stories too.

A_Satori

I've been crying for a solid 30mins after reading this story. I've spent my whole weekend reading this and I was not expecting him to die. I know it's just a story, but I hope you make him live in the sequel. I cant handle it if he doesn't. I'm too invested. You're a brilliant writer. I would definitely buy this story if you had it published.

Your story is well written. You do suck us in and get us to care about the characters, which is a mark of good writing. But the story is depressing as hell. I can't imagine anyone comes to this site wanting to go away feeling like crap. But that was the way this story left me, and from other comments, I'm not unique in that.

Snifff! What a sad ending, but reading the story was an amazing ride... It took some time for me to get even with reviewing some of your stories I've read some time ago bot, oh well. I'm certainly recommending your works in another forum. I hope more readers find your works. Thanks! ^__^

Doesn't happen often that you find an erotic story that is surprisingly honest and plausible. the whole alcoholic thing and the dying. yeah it fits and was written well.

sad ending but fitting though perhaps a bit easy. you could have made this in to a pretty good soap series. still good enough for me.

This is an incredible story! Both my girlfriend and I are crying as we just finished the three part series.

I can't handle this. You are definetely off my list. I have read about 10 of your stories and more than half pissed me off, now this one takes the cake. Good bye. Lynn

good story till the end should make a nother chapter and let the guy redeem himself and be a good person to the girls terrible way to end the long story

Great story. Good plot development, dark themes and struggles, and appropriately tragic ending. I enjoyed it all thoroughly.

I do like a happy ending.....

I didnt want it to end that way.....that sucks....good story tho

I always read the end of a story to gauge if it's worth my time. The first chapter was nice at least. But won't continue now. Jeezus!

completely fucked man We're not here to read that kind of thing here.completely spoiled it

This was a tearjerker. It it ended the only way it could. Your a pretty good story teller.

What a rollercoaster of emotions. The best story ive read on here by a mile. I wished it had a happier ending but it was still a perfect ening to a fascinating well written tale. Thought I would just be reading another story to whack it to and then I couldnt stop reading for the story more than the Erotica. 10/10