All Comments on 'A Private Dance Ch. 02'

by RockStarGod

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secretreader2018secretreader2018about 6 years ago
Great, but short.

I am really liking your story, but for me, the chapters are too short. I’m looking forward to the next one.

nthusiasticnthusiasticabout 6 years ago
Agreed.

Writing this good deserves to be longer so it can be savored.

crazycujocrazycujoabout 6 years ago
Leg breakers!

It looks like he's going from the frying pan into the fire!

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Just a city boy. Born and raised in South (somewhere around) Detroit. I love to write for you and to read your stories as well.

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