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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Ohhhhhh the suspense is setting in!

Poor David is in a lot more trouble than ever before and it's all thanks to miscommunication - makes me wonder who exactly is to blame here or if it was all thanks to some incredibly emotional night. And Anthony hasn't exactly made thing easier with his "golden" silence about the money, wonder if he'll even spit it out on his own. But now my heart aches for Leslie as she seems to really like David only to come out empty handed because he fell for another girl. Damn so many potential plot lines I can't make up my mind which intrigues me the most.....

Still it's a worthy 5 from me. The next chapter better be written already.

bhill8671bhill8671about 6 years ago
Love it

Need a chapter 5 A.S.A.P.!!!

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Just a city boy. Born and raised in South (somewhere around) Detroit. I love to write for you and to read your stories as well.

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