All Comments on 'A Professor is Blackmailed Ch. 05'

As I hate stories that are left hanging.

Please reconsider

too complicated to be very believable

I know the author works hard and i don't like being negative, but the story just seemed to go downhill after the first few exciting chapters. Too many characters. One rape after another.

I will reread the first version of the story and compare. I have good memories of that, but then it was a long time ago, and maybe I am just remembering the first few chapters there, also.

It is criminal as an author to leave something midway.

Please reconsider and carry it forward.

only 5 chapters is no way good enough, and also if the story is only half baked and half way through.

if you need ideas I have plenty :-)

Dawn,

Yo tango su puse de maro en la casa y muy bonita Senorita. Tu es muy bueno Senorita yo delerio y facilio tu puse mucho. Tango much dinero y no su es cavita de cunnilingus por que tu casa. Es su casa demore porque you es fucke tu puse.

In engish i say i likes to much to fuk u. i has beg cok to fuk u hard. i works cuntstructun and u likes me strung chust n arm. i likes yu wet pusy. i likes yu call uself slut. you slut dawn?

u fuk me wit u nice wet cunt?

u beeg me to fuk u dawn?

u wunt me beg cok???

git on u nees beech!!!

u to gud fore me beech?

u thunk u to gud fore me?

u slut fore me beg cok slut dawn!

me is gong tu fuk yu hard dawn

beech. yu gut fuk hurd. yu me slut beech.

me cok vury hurd fore u dawn.

gone to fuk yu hurd.

fuk me cok dawn

suk me cok dawn

gut on you nees dawn yu hore

yu suk me cok

i fuk yu hurd

yu me nusty litle slut

yu me beech

Pedro

Please. I know your there as you published a 2015 story, come back and add to this story it doesn't have to spiral down to further abuse. Soaps survive on other forms of human interaction/distrust/conquest.

This series is quite ridiculous. I'm willing to suspend disbelief but there is nothing in this story that resembles how normal people act way over the top. Entertaining but it loses its appeal after a short time

I dont think you did anything to improve the character. Shame. Could hsve been similar to westville sluts.

Bdsm involves a masochist who has choice and (some) control over the situation. This is simply an obsessional rape fantasy. Very different beasts, especially since one involves jail time.

Boring and way too long

Had she shown the notes he left her to police and faculity, this story doesnt become a rape fest, which is slightly disturbing as it is. Maybe add a new man that believes her and helps to end her madness. Give her a chance to had a positive end to her nightmare. Nobody endures that type of punishment alone.

Loved the story and series. Wish people did not react so negatively in these comments which I guess made you stop working on this.

Anyways thank you and loved it

Awsome story

This is a great story! Dean and Harv were 2 different soles and they absolutely altered the truth