All Comments on 'A Program Pt. 01'

It's an interesting premise, clearly understood and paced nicely, but the grammar problems are distracting. There are many editors available on Literotica who would fix this up without changing the story at all.

Thanks for the note, I have already submitted second part and don't want to delay it. But with 3rd that I am now working on, I will submit it to for editing. At least to see the difference and get some hints from it.