by JackFlash1959
This writer is quite adept at filling out his plot in such an interesting and clever manner the story holds the reader's interest.
One has to admire how June is able to beat out her competition for Martin's sexual favors. Lovely Read! Well Written!
Wonderful, exciting, arousing.
I saw a couple errors, though, "sweet" for "suite" and something else I can't remembmer, but the story was great. An editor might help complete the polish, as for the most part, it really was very well written.
Thank you!
...after the nine-inch plus cock came into the story. Nothing after that could make the story better so there was no point in reading it.
You really set the standard and showed that middle age adult can have great sex and enjoy it.
I would love to be able to write like that.
Love this story. Have read it a couple of times and still enjoy it. Probably cause I can relate to the lack of sex drive but your not my therapist. I know it's a few years old but there is potential for a sequel.
That was a very good story it made me feel jealous wishing it was me and my wife who were in your story as we are the same age and she is very conservative when it comes to sex.
Write a follow up story to this and if it's as good I may get her to read it and see what happens.
This story was so juicy....one of the best I've read here. Thank you for taking the time to build a great story.
with anonymous' comment. Would like to get those girls on my wife and loosen her up just a bit. Quite a bit.
If I could watch my wife with Kay and Sandy, I could live happily ever after knowing how happy they could make her. Better than ANY man could.
Because who wants a pimp as her husband? Dumb