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Click here"I don't give a shit if he is a beard," Marcus said. "I don't want any other man kissing you. I don't like it, even though I know Mom and Dad think that you two are an item. Nathan wants to fuck you, Mina. All my friends want to fuck you. It's not going to happen. It won't ever happen. No other man will ever touch you but me."
"I agree," she said. "I wanted you to fuck me the night we turned eighteen. And even though I kept telling you no, I did want you to fuck me in the Lexus after Nathan's graduation party. But I'm glad we waited until tonight. Anything else would have been a cheat."
He handed her the champagne. "I am too. It was so good." Then he chuckled. "You know, we can still fuck in the Lexus."
"Ah, my brother," Mina said. "He's so nasty." Mina took a sip of the Moet.
Marcus smiled. "Let's have a toast, Mina. To us; to a proper celebration."
"How are we supposed to have a toast with one glass, you big dummy?" Mina inhaled sharply as she felt him twitch.
Marcus kissed the top of his sister's head as he felt himself stiffen. "Maybe we won't need a glass after all."
- COMMENTS
ariesorwhatevaover 8 years agoThis story is beautiful as well as erotic! It was written so well & it told a story rather than go right into sex. It has depth. Ugh Im in love with this story. Excellent work!
theurbanstorytellerover 10 years agoA few flaws but an excellent story. You have to add more about these two and leave it just these two. College, after college, etc. Its a romantic story...leave it that way!
SomethingInTheWaySheMovesover 10 years agoWhen I see ridiculous splatters of information sprinkled into a story it tells me, A: You did some research into something which wasn't familiar to you. And, B: You weren't able to incorporate the results of that research in a way that didn't LEAP OFF THE PAGE AND SMACK OUR FACES in the process.
It reads like you did a quick search on a culinary page and crowbarred the results into a story where it wasn't really necessary.
You wrote a fuck story. Stick to the fucking. Nobody gives a shit about what your characters are going to eat. (Seriously. Conduct a poll if you doubt that.)
mafia_patriarchover 10 years agoIt's a well written story, with a few syntax errors. It has a very mature tone to it that occassionally lapses due to oddly phrased dialogue. It reminds me a little of an unposted story of mine.
