by victormann
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Someone's got issues. For a comedy, this is pretty good, I was laughing the whole time.
I don't think domination is synonymous with derogatory carelessness. But, whatever floats your boat.
I was hoping for a more fleshed out story but in your attempt to cover all the bases you got too far from reality. For instance, a woman who never wore high heels would NEVER be able to walk around in 5" pointed spike heels. Even women used to heels wouldn't be able to do this for very long. Sleeping on the floor sounds like a neat idea but the reality is that it's cold and unforgiving and causes aches and pains that aren't minor or easily overlooked.
The husband comes off as really angry and kind of hateful toward women in general rather than some master dominator. Unless hatefulness is something that turns you on, it really has no place in domination and submission. It is this very confusion that keeps people from understanding that being dominated by your husband is a good and healthy way to save a marriage. But not many people, even among those who are into D/s, are turned on by hateful behavior.
Women are for our use and cannot be treated a equals, but you go too far. You start the day off acting like the Master of the universe (which obviously you had NOT been the night before.)
Interesting essay that goes too far into the "no means yes"
As one comment pointed out, close to comedy.
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it is hard for me where my proper place is, but not begin able to keep any thing secret from Master. keeps me in my place
No to the Random approach to Orthography.
Spelling and correct capitalization matter, man! You're in a written medium. Formalities are the bones that hold up the meat. If the bones are weird and wrong, the meat isn't appetizing, either.
Why is everyone so mad as a woman l think this is beyond right men are sadistic by nature and women were born to satisfy their needs and it shouldn't be any other way honestly, every woman should be a servant it's just how things are and yes you just have to train a woman into accepting her place pretty much like a dog the world would be such a better place if we just admit our place and worship our men properly and let them rule as they should and there's nothing called rape it's just men practicing their own rights if a man sees a woman he likes he is free to claim her as his property and fuck her nonstop and she has no right to protest she must only try to please him and worship him while he takes his natural right please let's be true women and serve our masters because that's what we were born to do truly
The Male Dom needed to be taken out and literally horsewhipped and then shot.
Scores 1/5