by ElderDirt
Thanks for sharing this sweet romance. It just goes to show that sometimes things have a way of working out for the best. Are you sure this isn't a real story?
Need an editor or a better editor.
The reading would have been more enjoyable.
Even though I gave you a 5, I was extremely disappointed with all the mistakes in the story. It made reading it all the more difficult and prevented me from fully enjoying it.
Please get yourself a competent editor before you submit any more stories and perhaps fix this one up and re-submit it.
Far too many mistakes. Get an editor to straighten this out.
What a short and sweet story just like Kelly. Loved it! Consider an additional chapter please.