All Comments on 'A Prophecy Come True'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Sweet!

Thanks for sharing this sweet romance. It just goes to show that sometimes things have a way of working out for the best. Are you sure this isn't a real story?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
4*

Need an editor or a better editor.

The reading would have been more enjoyable.

telecomtomtelecomtomover 5 years ago
Agree fully with 4*

Even though I gave you a 5, I was extremely disappointed with all the mistakes in the story. It made reading it all the more difficult and prevented me from fully enjoying it.

Please get yourself a competent editor before you submit any more stories and perhaps fix this one up and re-submit it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Stopped after one page

Far too many mistakes. Get an editor to straighten this out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

What a short and sweet story just like Kelly. Loved it! Consider an additional chapter please.

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