by Cephus Smith
I love these historical pieces...I can't wait to see what develops
This is absolutely gorgeous!
Please, please, please keep writing more :)
I read Your Cabin story first, and decided I had to read your longer piece, From what Ive read so far, I love it! I hope you are going to continue writing a long time, I like nothing more than to read my favorite authors works. The time is always right, and you are fast becoming one of my favorites! Only one problem.... Ill soon run out of reading material as I read so fast. hehe. Thankyou for giving me more to enjoy!
This is, thus far, an enjoyable tale. Grammar and spelling errors aren't many, but some are enough to detract slightly during reading. Am looking forward to reading more.
Though I have thus far only read this beginning, you may color me impressed. I can only assume that it gets better, eh?
A very sweet and intriguing start, but this chapter is riddled with a number of simple typos and homophone mix-ups. It would benefit from editing and re-posting. If you're ever inclined to do this, I'd be happy to edit for you.
Regardless, I look forward to reading further when I get home from work. :)