All Comments on 'A Queen's Knight Ch. 01-03'

by Cephus Smith

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great start

I love these historical pieces...I can't wait to see what develops

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Absolutely gorgeous

This is absolutely gorgeous!

Please, please, please keep writing more :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Awww

I read Your Cabin story first, and decided I had to read your longer piece, From what Ive read so far, I love it! I hope you are going to continue writing a long time, I like nothing more than to read my favorite authors works. The time is always right, and you are fast becoming one of my favorites! Only one problem.... Ill soon run out of reading material as I read so fast. hehe. Thankyou for giving me more to enjoy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Enjoyed this

This is, thus far, an enjoyable tale. Grammar and spelling errors aren't many, but some are enough to detract slightly during reading. Am looking forward to reading more.

DragonSlayer_OKDragonSlayer_OKover 13 years ago
Most Interesting!

Though I have thus far only read this beginning, you may color me impressed. I can only assume that it gets better, eh?

Archangel_MArchangel_Mover 7 years ago

A very sweet and intriguing start, but this chapter is riddled with a number of simple typos and homophone mix-ups. It would benefit from editing and re-posting. If you're ever inclined to do this, I'd be happy to edit for you.

Regardless, I look forward to reading further when I get home from work. :)

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