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by DawnSunset

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Too many errors

Please get an editor or read the story aloud to yourself before submitting it and you'll find the errors.

Otherwise, your story is very erotic and has a unusual premise. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

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