All Comments on 'A Quickie for a Needy Husband'

What a nice story to bring reality to fantasy. When two people love each other, it's nice to believe that they can satisfy each other without having to believe that some heavenly choir singing and smiling down on them as they enjoy satisfaction. Too bad I wasn't Dave in real life!

I thought it was great.

Wish mine would do that.

Thanks for sharing.

Bob

Good job on the story line. Try to add more sensuality to draw your reader into the room. How does she feel when he fondles her? What does it feel to both of them as he enters her? Don't let your players just be attached to a plunging organ. Those organs are attached to personalities, bodies, imaginations and nerve endings. I could see a series of stories about this couple. Bravo.