by fin
How love should be found with discovery and caring, moving along as events develop.
One would like to know more about these characters, where they've been and where they're going, which is a sure sign the reader's been hooked. Great job. Best, Ken
This is a story that is constantly taking the reader by surprise in a nice way. The two characters were quite interesting and I too could see this going on in more follow ups. But if this is all there will be, it was a good read.
I was quite moved by the romantic suggestions.
Brought back fond memories of the first time with the woman who became my wife. The hesitant eagerness, the pain but then wanting more. Do very descriptive. Loved it.