All Comments on 'A Real Man in My Life Ch. 05'

You have the knack of creating really good characters that your readers can associate with - I had a 'Bradley' in my class at school!

TBH, although this is an erotic story site, the sex rather gets in the way of the rattling good yarns you spin.

Personally I think you have it in you to become a main stream writer of regular fiction.

The only slight critique I can make is that there on or two spelling errors - words which sound the same as the intended one, but are OK'd by a spell checker as they are spelled correctly, but are the wrong meaning! An example - "poured", when you meant "pored".

More great tales, please!

Hoist with my own petard - a too quick post of a comment which needed an edit. Spot the error time😕

WOW!

Paul in Oklahoma

Loving your work on here, please write more!

Great story, makes me wish I had friends like that when I was a kid

Excellent story with great dialogue and storyline. Please continue to write and post.

Great story, thoroughly enjoyed it . 5*

Minor nitpick - GR4Y is not a valid licence plate in the UK, not even for personalised plates

One of the very best stories on the site

She still spent 19 years with (and loved) that fucking cock puppet. Hard to feel too much sympathy.

The author wanted to write a fairy tale, so she did; issues like how a perfect woman could be attracted to the perfectly contemptible man are ignored. This author, truly and seriously needs to earn to never, ever use the word “giggle” again. I was surprised at the number of errors, new for knew, and later the exact reverse, proofreading would be a great idea.

I liked the whole thing.

My thanks to the author for the efforts and time spent in creating these characters and their story

Damn story cost me a morning and I don't regret a single minute of it.

Good story. Had a few too many errors that should have been picked up by an editor or proofreader. Which spoiled the flow for me. But it was an enjoyable story at times emotional especially the concert. Parker was an absolute asshole and I'm surprised Natalie stayed with for so long. Overall I enjoyed the series its very good very very good but it isn't brilliant. BardnotBard